When i asked a group of people for feedback on my second advert they replied with this -
Tom: when watching it i thought the editing was good however it lacked something in the middle"
Joe: " the shots of the eyes with the goal keeper as if it was a western film added narrative to your advert which is needed to get the audience watching"
The feedback overall was positive with minor tweaks surfacing, it also showed what some of the watchers wanted with the advert.
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