Friday, 4 April 2014

Evaluation

In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products? 
I and my team mate chose the task of creating 2 adverts, a radio advert and a sponsorship sequence. To start with we looked at different existing adverts and gained inspiration from these so that I was able to  understand what the key aspects included were and how we could go about using these for the best possible result. We took interest in advertising energy drinks. This entrigued us because we found that the existing adverts that promote energy drinks are aimed at male teenagers. This was adequate for us as we are able to use people of this age and gender easier than using older people for the acting. Furthermore, using this age can promote youth and health in which we devloped later on. Even though we wanted to use this age and gender as our target audience, we also wanted to entice a wider range of people by using a female in one of the adverts, this is to break boundaries and to avoid sexism. Not only by using a female character but by using an Asian character in one of the adverts to target not only white British people. Having decided to create an advert on an energy drink I carried out more research into what makes a good advert and how to make it relate to the target audience. In my findings I descovered that the drink was associated with parties and gigs and active events such as these. We took interest in keeping the 'upbeat' feel to the advert but wanted to change the use of the product. We did this by using and developing a sporting theme. We decided to show a positive relation to the drink into being healthy minded. To promote the product we wanted to demonstrate that the drink was able to improve performance and help succession within the activity of the drinker. 
Not only did I research into what aspects help the promotion of the product but what aspects the advert itself had to unclude such as the length and pace of the advert. I discovered that they ranged from around 30 seconds to 55 seconds. Within this time a fast pace was delivered created by lots of quick shots that used straight edits. My adverts were around 30 seconds long. I wanted to demonstrate the transition of being slow before drinking the energy drink and having a faster pace afterwards to promote the improved performance created by the drink. I did this by using cross disloves, longer paced shots and a slow, focused heart beat before the drink was consumed. After the consumption, the pace of the shots were shorter, using the idea of the quick transitions by using straight edits and the sound track sped up.
 
What have you learned from your audience feedback? 
When creating my adverts audience feedback was essential to my development. It was key to create an advert that my target audience would be interested in. For my first advert I asked for initial peer feedback. This was useful as I gained ideas that I may not have thought of otherwise. 

" I would try and show the brand earlier on to make the audience realise what the advert is actually for"

 This was a key point in the first advert that I needed to concider and changed the shots in this to make it clear as to what I was trying to advertise. I had not thought about adding a shot of the drink before hand. I did this by empasisig the slogan and making the energy drink can visible to onlookers. Using this shot gave the advert subtlety and a subconcious ecpectation as to what is being advertised by the target audience. 

Another comment made was how the running shots were not postioned well as some characters were not as visible as others. Also a thought was raised to rearrange the order of shots when lining up to race in the first advert to get the a lasting tesion which had a better build up as a result to this. The climax was a lot better, and one final thing put forward by peer sudents said was the background noise distracted and clashed with the different shots. To amend this I could either refilm these shots or 'duck' the soundtrack which enabled the volume of the background noise to change. I tried out this option and it worked well so distactions from the product were removed. This allowed viewers to only hear the music wanted. With this feedback I feel it helped the advert greatly and would not be the piece now if it was not for the criticism.
With my second advert the feedback was more in depth. The feedback gained is able to be viewed on my previous posts. To amend the criticisms formed from this I realised that the clips were slightly too long and slowed the pace down due to this. I ameded this which benefited the clip well. 

Another comment made was that the music was slightly off time, people wanted to see that when the character kicks the ball, the soundtrack should change with this, however it did not before hand and found it difficult to amend. This took time but was managed and made a big difference to the outcome. This made me realise that the timing of the clips was highly important to get the best out of the material and so I had to be more precise with how I edited each aspect of this.

Another point put across was there was not a shot of the character placing the ball on the ground and my peers felt it lost a bit of fluidity with it. I filmed the shots asked for, and with it, the flow did change due to the feedback.

My radio advert was very much up to criticism at first and my target audience liked how my ideas were forming in the process of this. When my first draft was created, a lot of changes from sound levels to jumpy edits were pointed out. I went through my feedback and one comment that stood out to me as a vital point was the emphasis and clarity of the speech used. The first draft had "great intense dialogue" but some of the words slurred with pronunciation being a downfall. With re-recording this and making sure the dialogue was crystal clear, the advert sounds a lot better and promotes the product well.

The sponsorship sequence was hard to gather feedback on as it is so short, however one piece of feedback that changed the way I edited the piece was, 'Each individual shot seems to be too long, which Imakes the advert seem longer than it is.' Due to this I the shots so every time he kicks the ball it cross dissolves to another edit, this improved the viewing greatly. 

Peer feedback was useful but I realise that some bias opinions may be put forth. With this in mind I asked strangers in my school from my target audience to view and comment with what they like and dislike.
How did you use new media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?
When starting my project I had to research different energy drink adverts to gain a better understanding of what makes the product interest and grab the attention of the target audience. I decided to use a website called YouTube where there was an archive of different energy drinks adverts to choose from, with using this it made my research a lot easier;being able to research different styles in advertising energy drinks with ease.
Using an Apple Mac a piece of software I used for editing was iMovie. This enabled me to edit my products in detail. Having used this software I found it quite easy with knowledge from AS still in my mind, however there were some technical hitches for example, when trying to put my sound across it would automatically insert the whole clip when I only needed it on just one scene. I soon realised that I had to move the sound into the correct place to allow it to work in the way I wanted it to.
A piece of software that I used for the radio advert was Garageband. I had little experience with this software only briefly using it in AS. When creating my radio advert I found it was difficult to get the levels correct with each individual layer of music on top of each other. However, once using it for a week or two, it had became a lot easier to know where to navigate buttons and understand the software which helped with the speed of making. Another hitch I had when using Garageband was finding how to get downloaded items onto the software. I had help from friends who demonstrated what needed to be done to achieve what I needed to do which was a simple drag and drop into the software once the download was on my area.
Blogger was my choice of keeping progress, it is a website that allowed me to put pictures on and create posts on what I had done. Having had a lot of experience with it in AS it was quite easy for me to update my progression. 

I used iDVD which is software that I am completely new to and I found it difficult trying to work with. I needed to use this software to burn the adverts I created onto a disc. However a glitch I encountered was not being able to burn the disc because the discs given were not formatted so I had to use a normal PC instead of the Apple Mac I was using to change this so I could burn the content on the disc.

Another piece of technology I used throughout was a digital camera. Having difficulty with aspects such as downloading the files onto the computer in my AS I had a basic understanding of how I could go about these areas of dount. A problem occured while trying to upload files was difficult to transfer them onto the software 'iMovie'. This was frustrating as it was not only guess work but it was time consuming with the different attempts in getting the files where I wanted them to be. With help I managed to get the files on after changing the format of the clips and I now feel confident that I could do it on my own.
How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?
Having researched into energy drinks I wanted to keep this the focus. I designed and created my own energy drink can called 'Primal'. I used this made up brand and slogan 'The Strength Within' throughout each advert I created. By linking each advert together with the sporting theme, I was able to make a good repor with the audience as they would expect a sporting themed advert after seeing one of the adverts. 

While creating the pieces I did not want to only link the adverts with just the brand, I wanted to make the edits fast within each piece to build a style so that it is recognisable to the audience. I used short, straight edits in the main adverts and the sponsorship sequence with a fast sound track to create this affect. For the radio advert this was more difficult as the emphasis had to be put across by using only sound. I also included intense music to keep the interest of listeners.

Draft

With my posts i have kept them as drafts, so i could go back to them and edit, it has helped me tweak certain posts with things i have forgotten.

Radio Advert tweaks

With feedback from the people listening to it, they found with the gun shot at the end it slightly distorts my slogan at the end, so i have cut down the gun shot and made it a clear and final gun shot before my slogan comes in, I have also changed the sound levels as some said the music masked my voice and couldnt here it correctly, with that all changed the audience said it was alot better.

Feedback Advert 2

When i asked a group of people for feedback on my second advert they replied with this -

Tom: when watching it i thought the editing was good however it lacked something in the middle"


Joe: " the shots of the eyes with the goal keeper as if it was a western film added narrative to your advert which is needed to get the audience watching"


The feedback overall was positive with minor tweaks surfacing, it also showed what some of the watchers wanted with the advert.

Feedback Advert 1

When creating my piece i didnt want it to be biased to my views and only create what i wanted to see, so i gathered a group of people together and made them give feed back on my piece so i can edit/change what needs to be done to make it a better piece all together.


Oliver:
" I found the advert very easy to watch and understand however i feel the race should have a little more build up to make the advert more intense"

Joe:
"when watching it the only pointer id give is to have a longer catch line at the end of the advert and also make the transitions alittle smoother"

Dylan:
" With showing your brand i would have a shot earlier on to make it obvious to the watcher/audience on what the advert is on"


This is only some of the feedback given but it really helped me change my piece and see things the audience would want, with the main factors making the advert more intense and smoother transitions.

Radio Advert

When coming up with the advert i wanted to keep it on the theme of sport and it giving that vital boost when drinking it, the dialogue i created was so i could dramatize it with sound the advert is " Five minutes to game time, the clocks ticking, the pressures mounting and you need that added boost to beat your competition, and that boost you need is primal, with its all natural supplements and no added sugar  its scientifically proven to work in minutes discover primal discover the strength within" when coming to the sound of the piece i wanted it to be hinting towards time so i chose a piece of music that had an element of time within the music with a slight ticking noise of a clock and when coming to the slogan at the end I chose to do a gun shot before to make them think its a race then the catchy slogan comes.

Cross disolves

While editing today, i found the edits very jumpy and not as seamless as id like, so i went into the effects side of editing and started to add cross disolves, with adding them it made the piece a lot less jumpy and easier to watch, another effect iv used for my editing shot is a 3 way split move from one shot to the next which brings each can individually

Sponsorship sequence editing

While editing the sponsorship sequence today, i have found with it its harder to create a piece with such little time and with each section i have to cut to the raw material and put in the bits that are needed to create,
The sponsorship sequence is going to be sponsoring soccer AM which is a  TV show, this goes with the sport theme of my product.

Editing advert 2

When editing it today, I felt when I had the draft of the piece done I needed to add more to it to be intense, and with my feedback previously given from my teachers I added the eye shots to show it was as if it was a cow boy western film, with adding that shot and a couple others it really brought my second advert to life

First film day

We went to the race track and filmed the shots using the storyboard, with the story board it helped us get each shot done and not forget anything on the film day, when filming by the end I found it hard to get the consistency of lighting with the camera available

Creating the product (Cans)

With our logo selected by our audience we set to work and create our product for our adverts
Here was the first prototype of our cans which was very plain and not we'll designed but it was a starting block 


We chose to different types of can to see which we would use and how it would look with the finished product

We then added colour to our templates and tried to see what they would like created 
With the colour it definately caught your eye more but it looked very unprofessional with the stretched text, we also came to a decision on which can to use, and this was the far left one, as it was nicely fit for our template and there wasn't any unnecessary cutting for the rim. 
Our final product we created the templates with the measurements of the can, here are the templates : 

As you can see they have been largely changed with the back pieces finally added with more of a professional finish, we decided to change our logo colour with each can to go with the theme. 

Here are the final cans we made : 

Overall I'm happy with the progression of our product however if I had chance to tweak the product I would have may be added a different size Into the mix 

Scrapped Storyboard Idea

With our storyboards we always asked for our teachers and our audience to give feedback and with this  particular story board it didn't work out with the narrative, we decided not to go with this story board, the idea behind this advert was that the main character is being chased down an alley way and he manages to drink our product and fend them off, however we felt it gave the wrong feel to our product, and we didn't want to associate our product with thugs we wanted to go down the athletic route





Story board - Advert 2

Our second advert was still on the theme of sport, we decided to go with football for our second advert, the synopsis of our second advert is where a guy needs an added boost before he takes the free kick, so he drinks our product and manages to make the free kick, with him celebrating at the end, and the product slowly coming to end the advert, we decided on a free kick as it clearly showed him getting one up on his opponent.




Storyboard advert 1

This storyboard is the initial idea for our first advert;
The synopsis of the advert;
A group of atheletes are all lining up getting ready for a sprint on the track, however theres a missing athlete taking his time in the sport house drinking our drink, he arrives confidently with a different type of music to the shots i show of the other athletes, the gun goes off and the race starts with him speeding a head, and the athletes behind faltering, with the end shot of him on a bench sipping the drink being the winner, it also ends with a close up of our product.




Brand name

The logo was a big part for us, it had to be right for the drink so we brainstormed afew names and made a tally chart so we could get other peoples opinions and not be biased on our decision

Here is the brain storm of our brand names




The tally chart showing that primal was the most popular with it getting the most votes, I believe this is a good now for our brand

intial Ideas ( brainstorm)


When we created our ideas we made this storyboard to have a Plain view of what we wanted and the branches we could look at, with it we said the things we most wanted to do so we have more passion with the advert we were doing, in the end we did decide on a energy drink advert. 


a simpler view :

Creating a logo

When creating a logo we wanted to make sure it appealed to our chosen audience so we created a tally chart to see which logo appealed the most, we also didnt show them the previous results so it wouldnt waver there decision.



the tally shows that number 5 was the most popular, this will go onto our cans of energy drinks on a wider spread size, this showed us what our audience would want on a drink can and if we didn't want to use that specific logo it could be used as a template for our next one.

Target audience

This was a big part for us to get the right audience as our coffee advert before didn't feel right with the audience we tried to sell it to, with this we came up with a lift of each audience type and made sure we had an understanding on who we should sell it to, with an energy drink we felt it would be teenagers and young adults that would buy into our marketing, as older people wouldn't always care for energy drinks.

while discussing we briefly wrote targets and ideas for our audience to keep it in mind throughout our product progression

Research - Gillian Dyer - "lines of appeal"

Gillian dyer, has come up with an idea that advertisers always pull on the lines of appeal,They use images of, or make reference to things to tap into our desires or fears.

According to Gillian, Advertisers that specialize in family think/know that everyone wants to belong, so they use this within adverts, a good example would be the fairy liquid brand, always showing a happy family.

When trying to advertise the luxurious lifestyles they make you look into your inspirations and make the appeal with that, a good example would be Gillet shaving cream it shows the famous athletes use it, which then makes you feel like using it.

Dreams and fantasies also play a big part in advertising, when advertisers tap into it they want  the audience to be sucked in with desire of what they've always wanted.

Love and romance is a strong way for advertisers to suck the audience in with everyone wanting to belong a good example for romance lynx, how lynx basically say you wear our brand and the women will come following.

Humour - it will always be a good for advertisers to use as it makes there advert more memorable if the audience laughed at there piece an example of this is the cadburies eye brow advert.

location is very particular when advertising the lines of appeal sugguest when trying to advertise it has to be picturesque for the audience to enjoy and want there product a good example for this is the thomson holiday company.



Research - Monster Energy Drink Advert



The opening shot introduces a male character in his early 20’s running urgently around a corner. We soon discover in the next shot that he is running away from three other people. This tells the audience that the man running away has done something mischievous. He is wearing a baseball cap, hooded jumper and jeans. This character is a representation of the ‘ideal’ target audience. The time appears to be around mid-day as it is light and clear to see what is happening. This may promote the drink to people who may not have a job.


The pace of the editing is fast which is emphasised by the camera movement used creating a pace that may be intriguing to the target audience as it is stereotyped that young men like action based activities.
The next shot of the man shows him quickly hiding behind a bin next to a light alley way. Behind him a coloured man leaning on the wall smoking in a hooded jumper. He gets up and walks over to him casually. This may represent this man, who is going to give the one in need the ‘Monster’ drink, as a God-like figure.
A shot of the chasers feet are quickly shown.
An over the shoulder shot of the man hiding is shown standing up as if to think that he may be a threat. We gain in this shot by the other man’s hand gestures and body language as if to say that he is no threat. This may also represent another ‘ideal’ target audience.  
He hands the man in the cap a ‘Monster’ energy drink. His hand positioning on the can allows on-lookers to see the logo on the can so they can recognise what the advert is trying to promote.

The man receives the drink thankfully, looking at the can which can draw viewer’s attention on the can.
The men chasing him are shown again but higher up their body this time as this time it was their feet that was shown. This makes viewers feel like they are gaining on him.

The people chasing him are seen coming round the corner looking in all directions to try and find him. The camera focus is on the chasers while the background is blurred where the man running away is seen in the background, positioned to the side so that it is clear to viewers that he is drinking the drink given to him. In the foreground the chasers are seen with the closest one to the camera looking in the direction of the screen so that on-lookers can see his face. The other two are seen behind him.

A shot from behind the chasers is shown to show them closing down on the man.

A clear shot with the man is shown drinking from the can while the focus of the camera is on the three men getting closer. This is to emphasise the change in ranking that will be made in a few shots.
The chasers are seen slowing down with their facial expressions turning shocked and scared looking directly into the camera, demonstrating a point of view shot of the man that once was ‘weak’ but from drinking the ‘Monster’ can, is now strong. This is the first time that we see the three of their faces together, when they are seen as most vulnerable. The camera shakes and rises as the fear grows on their faces. This allows on-lookers to build their own image of what they think they are scared of as it is not shown.
All three men turn and run from the man who once was weak.


 This is shown while a fade out is shown to a black screen followed by a zoom out of a large image of a monster can directly positioned in the middle of the screen. A black background is used so all attention is focused what is shown on the screen. The slogan ‘Unleash the beast’ is also placed to the right of the can. This slogan links into what happened in this advert of the man turning into a beast. As well as the name ‘Monster’ allows this image to be displayed. This screen is shown for a few seconds to show the difference in pace, allowing the change to help viewers remember the name and slogan.

I have noticed that the man drinking the ‘Monster’ energy drink has attained more screen time allowing the on-lookers to relate more to him rather than the people chasing him.

Research - Relentless - " Here to be heard"

While gaining ideas for our own advert i have looked into some energy drink adverts to gain ideas from.

The link for the advert : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DEKy38428IU


The advert starts with a very wide and open gallery this would be the establishing shot of the advert, its a very attractive open shot which clearly sucks the audience in to know what the advert is on, it slowly moves in to the room








it then cuts to the man who is sitting on the seat in the middle of the room, a man with tattoos it almost goes against the stereotype you first build up as it comes into the room as you would expect a well dressed man looking at art







A man is shown very briefly afterwards in a park, almost as a narrative or a story the person in the art gallery is thinking of







it then clearly shows the man in the park which is professor green a very well known rapper, this is a good thing for the advert as he would be associated with it, it also make the advert look a lot more respectable.













a wide shot of the man looking over the river thames, its a very clear and well done shot to show the narrative with it







the tattooed man comes into shot now with him looking like he is writing, most likely lyrics for professor green


it then cuts to him by his computer with the product strategically placed next to it to finally understand what the advert is about, its very vibrant and shows the can fully





it then cuts to the man drinking it topless to show all of his tattoos, over some fire, this shot is used to make a very bold statement of the instinctal and back to nature way of it.



it then goes to a shot of prof green rapping into a mic then him moving down to drink the relentless, it shows he actually cares about the product and makes you want to try and find out what its like


it then goes to a band getting ready for a gig under lights, this is very much associated with relentless, as mostly the audience is party goers.


with the party going and professor green and his band playing on stage it shows how they start there gigs with relentless

with the many of the remaining shots its of them performing a gig to a group of people, where it gets a bit hectic and thats what relentless want to associate with them and there audience


it then finishes off with there catch phrase and a shot of the drink, with it saying 'no half measures'





Overall this is a very well narrated and easy to watch advert with a big name in it making it look like a bigger budget advert, they make sure the associate things to there target audience so the target audience would be roughly late teens, mid twenties.







Ancillary Task

TV programme sponsorship sequence -
Sponsorship is funding given to a television program or network to help pay for airtime, usually sponsorship is offered in return for commercial advertisement, a sponsorship is usually paired with a programme that have the same age range of the viewers watching the selected program, for example a childrens advert would be put with a childrens program, another example is a sports brand sponsoring an athletic event, as the people watching the sport will be more interested and will most likely buy respectable brands. the relationship between the sponsorship advert and the programme is called synergy, where both parties mutually benefit eachother.

Tv sponsorship is at an all time high with the market worth over 190 million in 2007 according to carat which means it was up 8.5% on 2006, the growth is predicted to grow with each year

However the BBC sponsorship website has closed and will not re-open, the bbc will not advertise other opportunities for its events - they may take information that is appropriate to relevent non-commercial bodies about the small number of BBC events and make the guidelines clear

Radio Advertisement -

90% of all adults listen to the radio every week for an average of 22 hours a week, radio is still the second most consumed medium after tv, which is overa quarter of the average adults time spent with media across the day
The popularity of radio is because its easily accessable and effortless to consume, radio on any platform plays a unique emotional role in the listeners life, for example lifting their mood when engaged in other tasks, wherever and whenever, this is a role impossible for other media to fulfil to the same level.

A2 Introduction

I have been given an assignment on creating two adverts a radio advert and a sponsorship sequence, within this blog i will be documenting and showing my progress on how i put together my ideas and how i created my adverts